Post by Tommiboy13 on Apr 13, 2008 14:54:07 GMT -5
Finnstar was an old great leader of thunderclan. He had a hard start in life but helped thunderclan out a lot. It all began like this....
In the big city there was a lotof stray cats. This used to be a forest where they use to live. They stayed in the cities park, Littered by lazy twolegs who didn't care about the cats. The group, Shadeleaf lead by a cat always named Boussh (Bow like in boat's bow and sh!). They were in hard times, weak and starving every day. Only Boussh was strong and heathy. He didn't care that his clan was dieing, But he cared for his family. His mate was giving birth and he wanted the best for his kits, But there was another cat giving birth, Mia. She had worked double time getting enough food to last her until the kits were strong enough to be left. she hid in a dead tree about two thirds of the way up. She gave birth to four kits. Two black toms, one orangeshe-cat, and one blueish gray tom. They were the most beautiful things she has ever seen. She would name them later when that came along. But for now she would need to rest for they'll be hungry in the morning.
Mia had to hunt for boussh's family daily. She visited the tree often to feed them and caught enough for her storage and for her. She was worn out every night, and winter is coming! Her storage was small but enough for now..
When she was gone the kits huddled under soft moss waiting for her return. One day a young gray fox wanderd in there and climbed to were the kits were. They had never seen a fox before but knew it was bad. He flipped over the moss and stared hungrily at the helpless kits. He lunged at a black tom when the gray one hurled him at the foxes huge brown eyes, scratching and biting them until they were bloody. The fox swiped at him when his sister and brothers lep on the fox and scratched the other eye. The terrified fox swiped them off and fell to the bottom fleeing in terror. The kits cuddled together to stay warm.
mia came home exghausted to find the kits scratched and blood. she licked and made sure all of them were ok. She felt it was the naming cerimony for the gray one. She called him Finn, the great saivor of the old days."Finn," she said softly,"Protect your brothers and sister. Finn..." She slept soundly.
Then winter came. Mia came down with greencough. Finn knew he had to do somthing to help his mother. A cat With stars sewn in her fur came to him in his dream. "Finn," she said,"Go and find this. It's the only thing that will help Mia." He woke up right away and nudged Scalet,"Watch over mom. I'll be right back." he then lept down the tree and crawl out a hole in the snow covering the entrence. He padded through the white world. The cat came again and told him to dig. He dug as much as he could manage. Determined to find the herb, he continued digging with some unknown force. He dug through the 2feet of snow covering the ground and grabbed as much leaves that he could carry. He walked over the snow falling throught it with every step back to the tree. He climbed the tree with ease and dropped the leaves and fell asleep on the spot. Scarlet chewed to poluice and stuffed it in a scrawny rat and nudged mom. Mia ate it and laid down again to sleep. In a couple of days she was fully healed. she and the kits were still weak, but alive.
Later Mia started to teach them how to hunt using dead prey as a target. WHen the snow melted she named the black toms. Zee and Ferno were there names. They were big bullies. they had tied to kill scarlet once, the reason she's called scarlet. Because there's a huge pink scar from her front paw up her leg and to her tail. she couldn't move for a week. ANyhow, Zee and Ferno forced FInn to hunt for the whole family. Finn caught enough to Keep the familyfull and to please boussh. He became strong and speedy, But his brothers were stronger. With Finn gone they hurt scarlet and mia until the glorius day when they joined the boussh's gaurds. All was good until...
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Mia died. When she was hunting boussh killed her for fun. Finn greaved all night and knew now boussh was evil. He had to take scarlet away from here. the next winter almost spring they started off, Because the Shadeleaf cats stay inside trees all winter. Wandering through the city takes time but they soon reached the country by spring. They kept traveling fighting foxes and other clans. until they reached another hollow tree by a stream with moor on one side and forest on the other. scarlet Hunted and caught her first mouse that same day. they started living truely again. until a pack of foxes moved in. They attacked the tree in the middle of night. Finn and scarlet sent three wimphering off but one had pinned scarlet down. Finn jumped throught them catipulting the fox away when one got Finn in the hindleg. Scarlet bit one in the tail and ripped it''s ear fully off sending it whimpering. But another fox pinned her down and when Finn came to help one jumped on his back and spun him around. he landed on his back and the fox pinned him. Finn glanced over at scarlet. The fox lunged and got her in the throat. "NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Finn catipulte the fox the rushed over to the other one knocking it over. he scratched at it's face in a fury, fur flying. It flung him at a tree and knocked Finn out. The terrified foxes fled.
Finn awoke in the morning. he sat there seeking a purpus. Scarlet came to him and said,"One who doesn't look won't see. Find your purpose. Make it." Then she was gone. So Finn traveled. He helped all the clans along the way but not finding quiet a real purpose, until he met THE clans.
Dawnstar was the leader of thunderclan at the time if anyone wants to role play...
In the big city there was a lotof stray cats. This used to be a forest where they use to live. They stayed in the cities park, Littered by lazy twolegs who didn't care about the cats. The group, Shadeleaf lead by a cat always named Boussh (Bow like in boat's bow and sh!). They were in hard times, weak and starving every day. Only Boussh was strong and heathy. He didn't care that his clan was dieing, But he cared for his family. His mate was giving birth and he wanted the best for his kits, But there was another cat giving birth, Mia. She had worked double time getting enough food to last her until the kits were strong enough to be left. she hid in a dead tree about two thirds of the way up. She gave birth to four kits. Two black toms, one orangeshe-cat, and one blueish gray tom. They were the most beautiful things she has ever seen. She would name them later when that came along. But for now she would need to rest for they'll be hungry in the morning.
Mia had to hunt for boussh's family daily. She visited the tree often to feed them and caught enough for her storage and for her. She was worn out every night, and winter is coming! Her storage was small but enough for now..
When she was gone the kits huddled under soft moss waiting for her return. One day a young gray fox wanderd in there and climbed to were the kits were. They had never seen a fox before but knew it was bad. He flipped over the moss and stared hungrily at the helpless kits. He lunged at a black tom when the gray one hurled him at the foxes huge brown eyes, scratching and biting them until they were bloody. The fox swiped at him when his sister and brothers lep on the fox and scratched the other eye. The terrified fox swiped them off and fell to the bottom fleeing in terror. The kits cuddled together to stay warm.
mia came home exghausted to find the kits scratched and blood. she licked and made sure all of them were ok. She felt it was the naming cerimony for the gray one. She called him Finn, the great saivor of the old days."Finn," she said softly,"Protect your brothers and sister. Finn..." She slept soundly.
Then winter came. Mia came down with greencough. Finn knew he had to do somthing to help his mother. A cat With stars sewn in her fur came to him in his dream. "Finn," she said,"Go and find this. It's the only thing that will help Mia." He woke up right away and nudged Scalet,"Watch over mom. I'll be right back." he then lept down the tree and crawl out a hole in the snow covering the entrence. He padded through the white world. The cat came again and told him to dig. He dug as much as he could manage. Determined to find the herb, he continued digging with some unknown force. He dug through the 2feet of snow covering the ground and grabbed as much leaves that he could carry. He walked over the snow falling throught it with every step back to the tree. He climbed the tree with ease and dropped the leaves and fell asleep on the spot. Scarlet chewed to poluice and stuffed it in a scrawny rat and nudged mom. Mia ate it and laid down again to sleep. In a couple of days she was fully healed. she and the kits were still weak, but alive.
Later Mia started to teach them how to hunt using dead prey as a target. WHen the snow melted she named the black toms. Zee and Ferno were there names. They were big bullies. they had tied to kill scarlet once, the reason she's called scarlet. Because there's a huge pink scar from her front paw up her leg and to her tail. she couldn't move for a week. ANyhow, Zee and Ferno forced FInn to hunt for the whole family. Finn caught enough to Keep the familyfull and to please boussh. He became strong and speedy, But his brothers were stronger. With Finn gone they hurt scarlet and mia until the glorius day when they joined the boussh's gaurds. All was good until...
CHapter 2
Mia died. When she was hunting boussh killed her for fun. Finn greaved all night and knew now boussh was evil. He had to take scarlet away from here. the next winter almost spring they started off, Because the Shadeleaf cats stay inside trees all winter. Wandering through the city takes time but they soon reached the country by spring. They kept traveling fighting foxes and other clans. until they reached another hollow tree by a stream with moor on one side and forest on the other. scarlet Hunted and caught her first mouse that same day. they started living truely again. until a pack of foxes moved in. They attacked the tree in the middle of night. Finn and scarlet sent three wimphering off but one had pinned scarlet down. Finn jumped throught them catipulting the fox away when one got Finn in the hindleg. Scarlet bit one in the tail and ripped it''s ear fully off sending it whimpering. But another fox pinned her down and when Finn came to help one jumped on his back and spun him around. he landed on his back and the fox pinned him. Finn glanced over at scarlet. The fox lunged and got her in the throat. "NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Finn catipulte the fox the rushed over to the other one knocking it over. he scratched at it's face in a fury, fur flying. It flung him at a tree and knocked Finn out. The terrified foxes fled.
Finn awoke in the morning. he sat there seeking a purpus. Scarlet came to him and said,"One who doesn't look won't see. Find your purpose. Make it." Then she was gone. So Finn traveled. He helped all the clans along the way but not finding quiet a real purpose, until he met THE clans.
Dawnstar was the leader of thunderclan at the time if anyone wants to role play...